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As Enkara, Gathers her senses, she reliezes, what she just did and ponders, as to the cause of why this feeling, over came her. Happy to enjoy the apple she turns to see the boy looking at her, waiting for a response and smiles at the boys smile, while nodding her head in approval. Akhenaten's smile brightens and he returns to his seat, Content over his first contact with the newcomer. As Enkara begins to understand more about whats happening to her, she drops the apple, as if it was not even in her hand, as she tries to stand, she jerks her self back from the motion of the cart and grabs at someone's arm, next to her and looks out into the dessert as if seeing it for the first time, then she calms down and slowly looks at everyone, greeting them with a nod. She reflects about what just happened to her and where she is or what this is, for that matter, as she ponders more things. they become more thing to Enkara. She losses her self to the moment and just looks around trying to use her senses in this new but some how pleasing and enjoying environment. Enkara: "I don't have to make so many calculations" she says out loud, then puts her hand over her mouth, looking away, shy like. At that moment Enkara, becomes human, understanding every aspect, of the human condition and responding in kind. from a god, to animal in seconds flat.
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Scene: Panning back you can see the full scope of the immense desert around them. You even wonder how such journeys take place in this harsh environment. All over the northern desert on a daily bases. On they go to do their biding with the local villages. This is Akhenaten’s first journey to the outer laying regions of the northern Sahara desert, after losing his family from an explosion in his camp caused by a distillery to make alcohol to use for cleaning and drink. Not only did it give Akhenaten a distain for drinking. A sense of maturity and a need to tend for others, seemed to be his new path. After growing up, and going from village to village or small town. He came under care of Amjad’s nomadic camp two cycles ago, and has fit in quite well. He has a place here with them. Smart willful but not stubborn he has learned to tend to the wounds and others daily needs for the health of those around him. Actually this is his last journey with them after trading and settling a miner debt with a friend. He will continue on towards Tunisia to study health and medicine, in hopes of becoming a Doctor. One day he will come back to the desert to help the villages of his youth. Akhenaten is a tall kid in his awkward clumsy stage of pre adulthood. He’s smart engaging and most inquisitive of the bunch. Akhenaten wears glasses and is akin to have a raised arm when his hand is in his jacket pocket as he reads to the clan from a book he favors, would bring entertainment to the group he cares so much about. Scene: Akhenaten rustles with something sitting next to him and hesitates before he speaks to Amjad, who’s sitting in front of him. He holds out his hand for Amjad to see. Akhenaten: can I give this to her. Amjad looks down and up at the kids eyes, sure unless she’s asleep. Amjad turns back to face the front and spooks the Ox to speed up. Akhenaten huddles to scoot more closer to the girl and, hands her the apple. Enkara looks up at him, and you can almost see the reflection of the apple in her eyes, with only candle light. Akhenaten pauses for a second awed at this amazing creator, as if he has never seen such beauty. A thought appears in his mind. “her eyes, is she from the heavens above“. as if with out knowing, her human instincts over take her and reaches for the apple. Slowly moving to her mouth sampling a small bight. Before she realizes what she has just done. Senses over whelm her body starting from her mouth and causing tingles all over the rest of her body…
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Scene: The sun is slowly setting in the rough northern desert of the great Sahara. A dark silhouette of a man caring a women in his arms, as the group from the convoy awaits them to return. To greet the new welcomed addition to their convey, to the outer laying villages. As Majeed walks slowly back to the convey fallowed by the horse in toe. Majeed begins to reflect on the fact of how odd it was to find this woman in her condition. She was fine in fact more then fine, that’s what seemed so odd. No tracks in the sand, no evidents of how she got here. She shows no signs of injury or sun exposure, more then that her behavior seemed odd as well. Majeed adjusts the young women in his arms as the weight of her begins to become self evident.
Amjad as impatient as he sometimes can be, walks toward Majeed as he gets closer to the convey. To rush him along or help as best he can. Now coming closer he signals the horse who begins a slow trot to catch up with Amjad. Amjad brings the horse to moor to a wagon and walks back to Majeed again. Amjad: how could such a women survive out here was there any sign of how long she was here, is she hurt in anyway. Majeed: No no she’s ok.
Amjad signals to Kusana, to come tend to the girl. A tall well figured women, lumbers off the largest of the wagons, on the opposite side of the cart and walks around while resetting her long skirt ruffled from sitting so long. Grabs a blanket from a trunk, and walks continuing around the cart to meet the group. Majeed slinks the half asleep, seemingly fragile girl from his arms to Kusana. Kusana gently stands the girl as if knowing this is the first time she has ever stood on her feet, and begins to coddle her to get her to walk and join Kusana on the wagon with her. Majeed and Amjad settle their affairs with the straps for the horse and lose ends from unpacking in wagon of the convey to begin again on their trek towards the nearest settlement. Amjad troubled with how clear the stars in the sky are, worries that another light wind storm could start again before they could get to the nearest village. Amjad looks back at the girl concerned with her welfare, only to look back around to veer the wagon ox to a northwest direction towards a downward slop in the vista dunes.
Amjad as impatient as he sometimes can be, walks toward Majeed as he gets closer to the convey. To rush him along or help as best he can. Now coming closer he signals the horse who begins a slow trot to catch up with Amjad. Amjad brings the horse to moor to a wagon and walks back to Majeed again. Amjad: how could such a women survive out here was there any sign of how long she was here, is she hurt in anyway. Majeed: No no she’s ok.
Amjad signals to Kusana, to come tend to the girl. A tall well figured women, lumbers off the largest of the wagons, on the opposite side of the cart and walks around while resetting her long skirt ruffled from sitting so long. Grabs a blanket from a trunk, and walks continuing around the cart to meet the group. Majeed slinks the half asleep, seemingly fragile girl from his arms to Kusana. Kusana gently stands the girl as if knowing this is the first time she has ever stood on her feet, and begins to coddle her to get her to walk and join Kusana on the wagon with her. Majeed and Amjad settle their affairs with the straps for the horse and lose ends from unpacking in wagon of the convey to begin again on their trek towards the nearest settlement. Amjad troubled with how clear the stars in the sky are, worries that another light wind storm could start again before they could get to the nearest village. Amjad looks back at the girl concerned with her welfare, only to look back around to veer the wagon ox to a northwest direction towards a downward slop in the vista dunes.
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Scene: Enkara Is lying on the ground looking peaceful in her new shape with the back drop of the Sahara desert . In the distance a convoy is heading towards her at a slow pace, as you see through the ripples of the heat in the distance you begin to make out the convoy and the personage aboard . Two wagons, adults and children making there way through the desert and on to their destinations to trade with the local villages, that left major cities and towns to escape the harsh taxes and new governments, in nearby countries. Majeed: (raises his hand to point at an object in the distance) Look something is out there. Amjad: couldn’t be how would anyone be here, there’s no tracks or signs of a way for a nomad village to set up camp around here. Majeed: I’m sure of it, it’s a person. The person or object did not seem that far away to be investigated so Majeed: unteathered the Moore horse and rode up to take a look, to his surprise it was, a person. A young women wearing an odd white dress and seemingly asleep as if at home in her bedroom.
Majeed: got off his horse saying hello in the only language he knew and the women began to awake, slowly opening her eyes to expose lovely soft and bright gray eyes of a utmost intense glow about them like once they were filled with the stars. Enkara looked around her, not fully knowing what to take of it all, and looked at the man as if he was common place and not a stranger at all. Also that moments ago she was all alone in the desert brought here by an unknown force of nature
As everything came to focus in her mind she tested her self to see if she was still able, happy to find that she still was and greeted the man by replying what he had just said Enkara: hello. (also saying with the same hushed awakening voice) where am I. the man inched closer to get a better look of her condition surprised to see she seemed quite ok no tanned skin from the sun or hurt in anyway that he could see she did not even have chapped lips or appeared dehydrated . Amazingly she was perfectly fine to his note this was the third white man or women he had seen in his entire life and tilted his head in observation. Most beautiful too, he thought, erasing the grin from his face as he saw her look back at him. He stood up taking her hand with him bringing her to her feet, as she started to stand she felt a rush and lost her footing as he caught her he heaved her up into his arms and made a clicking sound to alert the horse to follow him and the new troop made their trek back to the convoy.
Scene: Enkara Is lying on the ground looking peaceful in her new shape with the back drop of the Sahara desert . In the distance a convoy is heading towards her at a slow pace, as you see through the ripples of the heat in the distance you begin to make out the convoy and the personage aboard . Two wagons, adults and children making there way through the desert and on to their destinations to trade with the local villages, that left major cities and towns to escape the harsh taxes and new governments, in nearby countries. Majeed: (raises his hand to point at an object in the distance) Look something is out there. Amjad: couldn’t be how would anyone be here, there’s no tracks or signs of a way for a nomad village to set up camp around here. Majeed: I’m sure of it, it’s a person. The person or object did not seem that far away to be investigated so Majeed: unteathered the Moore horse and rode up to take a look, to his surprise it was, a person. A young women wearing an odd white dress and seemingly asleep as if at home in her bedroom.
Majeed: got off his horse saying hello in the only language he knew and the women began to awake, slowly opening her eyes to expose lovely soft and bright gray eyes of a utmost intense glow about them like once they were filled with the stars. Enkara looked around her, not fully knowing what to take of it all, and looked at the man as if he was common place and not a stranger at all. Also that moments ago she was all alone in the desert brought here by an unknown force of nature
As everything came to focus in her mind she tested her self to see if she was still able, happy to find that she still was and greeted the man by replying what he had just said Enkara: hello. (also saying with the same hushed awakening voice) where am I. the man inched closer to get a better look of her condition surprised to see she seemed quite ok no tanned skin from the sun or hurt in anyway that he could see she did not even have chapped lips or appeared dehydrated . Amazingly she was perfectly fine to his note this was the third white man or women he had seen in his entire life and tilted his head in observation. Most beautiful too, he thought, erasing the grin from his face as he saw her look back at him. He stood up taking her hand with him bringing her to her feet, as she started to stand she felt a rush and lost her footing as he caught her he heaved her up into his arms and made a clicking sound to alert the horse to follow him and the new troop made their trek back to the convoy.
Chapter one: some where in time (but not right now)
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scene: Enkara is in here favorite shape, a stone like human shape statue with a long hat like cylinder shape on her head. In a soft brown stone like color, with dark endless star filled eyes. Holding what appears to be a new solar system flouting in her hands as billions of years go by, like seconds, as she sees the solar system evolve and grow. Time suddenly stops and a bright light appears to the upper left of her, and begins to pull her into it, as strong as she is, she can not resist the pull. When a voice suddenly begins to say, like coming from a deep tunnel. Voice: It's time my servant its time to see what you have done. Enkara: HUH? who are you, what are you doing to me. Woosh Enkara begins to be pulled faster and faster and deeper and deeper into the pool. Alast she is engulfed into the vortex, as she sees lights, shapes, images and events in her life pass by. Everything goes black as Enkara begins to feel something, something she has never felt, pain burning seething pain.
Poof she sees a star field, then things coming into focus, then a large object, more pain as things come more into focus, She begins to get her barrings she sees a planet one she has never seen before. Small mostly blue with clouds, as she looks closer she sees water, animals, people and energies. Energies she can not place or have ever seen before. She realizes she cant control her movement, as she gets closer to the planet. She tries however in vain to move or control her fall. Enkara gives up, and braces her self as best as she can. Enkara begins to feel hot and sees her self start to glow red hot feels the pain of the heat and begins to fall faster as the earths gravity takes hold. Enkara says to her self "Oh Great this is going to hurt" Enkara still a rather large object and coming in at a Angil hits the sand at top speed but maintains a strait pose as if like a landing airplane as dust and dubree kicks out from the impact. it's a fierce hit and taring parts of Enkara as she crashes then poof she gets the ability to stop and moves to slow her self to a Holt
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Laying their bewildered as the pain reseeds she realizes she has become able again upset at what just happened to her she begins to take her anger out on the poor planet but stops in awe of the beautiful planet and what she could do with it. wow look at this place she thinks and these energies what is this place. she reaches down to touch the planet and feels its warmth and love and begins to read the history and future of the planet the people, wars and possible destruction and stands back in horror of what she just saw, an image of her self with the back ground of the carnage the future holds for this place.
Why would this scene bother Enkara so much. She has been involved with such atrocities before how ever recently she has gotten out of the game with the double cross by a good friend and left to harvest energy from her nursery, she likes to call it what was so horrible about what she saw to get her to react the way she did. still shocked Enkara bends down to rest on her knees and thinks for a bit to ponder her feelings and what changes to her psyche they may have instantly done to her. Back in the course or Enkara's life she was not always so evil and destructive she was filled with grace, beauty and a great asset to the universe but, power, greed and her status slowly changed that as she saw the universe slowly changed around her so instead of becoming a slave to the order she became a master, but at what cost.
She thinks to her self again could there ever be a day with out the need of a master or slave something strange is happening to her eyes as she reflects on the beauty of the surrounding Sahara vista so peaceful and serene. It quiets the mind she says to her self. my kingdom for peace of mind she says aloud. still powerful and with full ablities restored Enkara is suddinly over come by something and magically transformed to a young women and faints falling to soft ground.
Terra Firma ENkarta (firm ground one map)
This is my scifi story about a universe builder who comes to earth by accident probably brought here by the vary forces of the universe it self. I will blog as I can, pages and pictures of this poor soul rot with guilt and over coming evil in its life as a universe builder. Overcome by greed, power and influence given to it long ago, entrusted with the vary tools that can shape the universe as we see it. I will begin with a short history of the universe builder and its path to power and influence as it effects us, even here on earth. well before it even comes to earth, and not even knowing or concerned with its puny existence.
lets call the universe builder, Enkara (an car aaa), Enkara is nor a being, god, or from an advanced civilization, was never born or created. It has always been and always will be, has really never known anything else, does not have a true shape or form but, does take the form of his or her liking. Enkara is out side the restraints or laws of the universe was given powers of unmatched abilities as like most of their kind. Universe builders are more like a civil servant of the cosmos and nothing more. some have risen and fallen do to their sometimes veracious need to understand their place in the universe, most deal with it ok some don't, as with Enkara has been through, in its life as a universe builder. Most don't have powers of influence like Enkara does mostly they do there work in the background, much less taking a shape or naming them selves. Enkara is engaged with the universal council which oversees the health and well being of the universe, either brought about by natural events or actions of other sentient beings
Enkara is more the front man of the universal builders and speaks on behalf of them, but lately in the council and with others of power and Enkara have fallen and have succumb to the influence of greed and power (and mastery of other souls) when it comes to the health and safety of the universe and the souls that inhabit it, evil is afoot and Enkara begins to see the consequences of her and others actions on the state of the universe. as Enkara reflects on the past, of the Being she used to be. all that she has, seems miner compared to the damage she has done to her vary soul and the universe it self..
Chapters to come
Chapter 1: Somewhere in time (but not right now)
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Chapter 2: Oh, how the universe waits
chapter 3: What will the wind bring this time
Chapter 4: Do you have any soda, I need a soda
Chapter 5: The battle for earth (when giants collide)
Chapter 6: A universe builder is born 'that's impossible!'
Chapter 7: What! That was me...
future chapters to come as I release them
lets call the universe builder, Enkara (an car aaa), Enkara is nor a being, god, or from an advanced civilization, was never born or created. It has always been and always will be, has really never known anything else, does not have a true shape or form but, does take the form of his or her liking. Enkara is out side the restraints or laws of the universe was given powers of unmatched abilities as like most of their kind. Universe builders are more like a civil servant of the cosmos and nothing more. some have risen and fallen do to their sometimes veracious need to understand their place in the universe, most deal with it ok some don't, as with Enkara has been through, in its life as a universe builder. Most don't have powers of influence like Enkara does mostly they do there work in the background, much less taking a shape or naming them selves. Enkara is engaged with the universal council which oversees the health and well being of the universe, either brought about by natural events or actions of other sentient beings
Enkara is more the front man of the universal builders and speaks on behalf of them, but lately in the council and with others of power and Enkara have fallen and have succumb to the influence of greed and power (and mastery of other souls) when it comes to the health and safety of the universe and the souls that inhabit it, evil is afoot and Enkara begins to see the consequences of her and others actions on the state of the universe. as Enkara reflects on the past, of the Being she used to be. all that she has, seems miner compared to the damage she has done to her vary soul and the universe it self..
Chapters to come
Chapter 1: Somewhere in time (but not right now)
Page: 1-5
Chapter 2: Oh, how the universe waits
chapter 3: What will the wind bring this time
Chapter 4: Do you have any soda, I need a soda
Chapter 5: The battle for earth (when giants collide)
Chapter 6: A universe builder is born 'that's impossible!'
Chapter 7: What! That was me...
future chapters to come as I release them
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